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Consistency: Does the background align with the overall tone and themes of your story?
Worldbuilding: Is the world you’ve created believable and engaging? Are there any inconsistencies or plot holes?
Pacing: Does the information flow smoothly, or are there parts that feel rushed or too detailed?
Potential: Are there any interesting elements or ideas that could be expanded upon?
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THE ROCK
In the very early morning of what was forecasted to be another blistering summer day in Dubai, the sun seemed to rise early. At precisely 3:14:15 AM the sky began to blaze. Seconds later, the worst disaster in human history imprinted itself into the memory of all who survived. Those who were awake and noticed will never get to tell the tale.
Those who were far enough away to survive the strike and witnessed the “event” describe an intense light moving like a bolt of lightning. A brief flash followed by a tremendous explosion. The strike was captured by at least a half dozen satellites. Before the day was out, the images had been broadcast around the world. They showed a streak of light entering the atmosphere. Dim at first, then blazing brightly, followed by a massive explosion that climbed rapidly into the upper atmosphere. The shock wave could be seen forcing its way outwards from the center of impact. Entering the atmosphere at about 30 degrees, with a speed of something like 90,000 miles per hour. Dubai died in seconds. The airblast and fireball killed millions that the actual rock missed. The surrounding countries were devastated. And the entire planet suffered the aftereffects for years
n the aftermath, it was determined that a rock roughly 500 feet in diameter smashed through our atmosphere and impacted the Earth just outside Dubai, leaving a crater nearly 3 miles in diameter. When it struck, unlike most meteors, large pieces remained intact and the largest piece actually bounced. Its path took it directly through the middle of The Burj Khalifa moments before the shockwave and fireball turned it all into broken rubble, and then landed in the middle of the Persian Gulf.
What actually vaporized was mostly our own Earth. The ejecta from the impact included smaller pieces of the rock which were scattered over several hundred square miles.The devastation was so sudden and so unexpected that the mind balked at acceptance. The explosion was heard thousands of miles away and the debris created secondary strikes hundreds of miles from the central impact site. Hundreds of millions of tons of dust and debris were thrown miles into the upper atmosphere. Humanity had just taken a shot between the legs. It was nearly twenty years before the seasons returned to anything close to “normal”.
Even today, Dubai and the rest of the Persian Gulf are still largely a wasteland. The bulk of the rock proved to be a previously unknown metal. (Later named Dubainium) This new metal was harder than anything that man has ever been able to produce. Lighter than steel but heavier than aluminum, and almost totally black, it provided the rock with a very low albedo. Perhaps one reason we never saw it coming. Later investigation also revealed several new elemental compounds that had never been seen before. Crystalline structures that current science said were impossible. Other discoveries (eventually) provided some answers, insights and clues into some of the odd nooks and crannies in the world around us.
In the following years the question most asked became, “why didn’t we see it coming?” Despite the billions of Dollars, Euros, Yuan, or Rubles spent on astronomical research, we never saw it coming.
We had no idea.
Humanity was rudely awakened that day. Our collective noses were rubbed into the fact that there is a whole Universe out there that we know absolutely nothing about. Sure. We had eyes out there. But they were the eyes of a baby. We can see. But we really have no idea what we’re looking at.
The pieces of the Rock that were recovered indicated it formed in nodules. Many small pieces were found, but none appeared to be fractured or damaged in any way. The main body of the Rock seemed to have bounced and landed in the middle of the Persian Gulf and buried itself in the mud and silt. It was eventually found but trying to raise a mass that size defeats us to this day. What can be made out however, is that the main body as well, appeared undamaged. The smaller pieces were subjected to intense investigation and testing. Unfortunately, not much could be determined. It could be described and weighed or compared to other minerals. For instance, its hardness made diamond look like chalk. Its color was somewhere between coal and obsidian. Samples were subjected to heat, radiation, pressure, abrasion, lasers and all manner of invasive testing. Nothing seemed to affect it until one researcher stumbled across part of the solution.
Dr. William Maclure, a materials scientist, was actually taking a break at the time. Sitting at his desk with his lunch, he had turned on the radio for some background, when he noticed some readings fluctuating while the music was playing. It seemed that certain musical tones caused changes in the mineral. Some of his instruments actually read something besides zero. Further research found that it wasn’t the notes that were being played, but the harmonics.
It was learned that with certain harmonic waves the Dubainium began to become malleable. As long as the sound was present, the mineral could be “manipulated” like almost any other metal. However, the exact pitch and frequency of those harmonics to do more than change the basic shape of the “sample”was still under intense investigation. Once the harmonic stopped though, it instantly recovered its original properties while retaining the shape it was deformed to. The possible uses were enormous. However, the supply wasn’t. Aside from the main body of the Rock, samples were few and far between. Lunar prospectors managed to find other nodes but nothing like the size of the Rock that killed Dubai.
Dubainium wasn’t the only discovery to come out of the Dubai Rock. While the main body held much of the world’s scientific interest, there were other compounds contained within it that science hadn’t seen before. Compounds that (current) science could not explain. Research was widespread and one of those discoveries led to the development of a material that answered a problem that had plagued space engineers since the beginning of spaceflight.
Simply put, protecting this fragile sack of meat and bones from the very real dangers of living and working in space, is something that has been an engineering nightmare since the beginning.
A spacesuit is a very complex (and expensive) machine. Its sole purpose is to allow a human to survive in space. With the discoveries made from research and study of the Dubai Rock, a compound was created using existing, plentiful, and local elements. Cheap to create and as versatile as plastic. It could be sprayed on a surface in a process much like powder coating. It could be formed into sheets that could be used in construction. And it could be used in many 3D printed parts. All by itself it really didn’t have much in the way of structural strength. But it was the perfect answer to many problems that have given space engineers headaches for decades.
Dubbed K.E.M.T.A.S ( Kinetic, ElectroMagnetic, Thermal, Aggret, Shielding ) this material provided the most comprehensive shielding ever devised. When combined with 3D printing and nano-robotic assembly, a spacesuit “skin” could be created that would protect the wearer from the extremes of space. Each suit is custom created for the wearer. A detailed (embarrassingly so) 3D scan is performed of every square inch of your body and the suit is printed. As each layer of the print is laid down, “nano-bots” create the needed contacts and fittings that will allow the suit to be worn and not drown in your own sweat. They also create the contacts and fittings that allow the suit to be used with a variety of configurations. It can be worn while working inside in a shirt sleeve environment, or, with the addition of breathing equipment and, if needed, thruster packs, for use in microgravity or the surface of a planet, moon, or asteroid.
Once created, the “fabric” fit the wearer like a glove. The Kinetic property allowed protection from small, fast moving objects like micro meteors. On impact, the fabric “froze” for a split second and distributed the energy throughout the whole suit. One could even be shot at close range with a large caliber handgun and survive. Though the impact would be like being kicked by a mule, you could get up and walk away.
The electromagnetic properties of the material prevented most forms of radiation penetrating to the inside. While there are some EM particles it would not stop (neutrinos for instance) the vast majority of radiation encountered in space became just a small concern.
The thermal element concerns its insulating properties. That is to say, you didn’t need to worry about being in the sunlight and frying like an egg, and at the same time shadow was no longer an issue either. Just the quarter inch thick layer of fabric and you could reach into a blast furnace and pick up a red hot piece of metal, or reach into liquid nitrogen with no real concern.
And of course the aggret part of the name refers to the fact that multiple compounds go into its composition. In reality it’s not so much the compounds, but the process used to combine them. In order to explain some of the oddities found in the Dubai Rock, scientists stumbled into combinations that conventional science couldn’t explain. However, the results were amazing.
Initial Impressions of Your Background
Strong Worldbuilding: You’ve established a compelling foundation for your sci-fi novel. The cataclysmic event of the Dubai Rock’s impact is a powerful starting point, and the subsequent discoveries of Dubainium and K.E.M.T.A.S offer intriguing technological advancements.
Potential for Conflict and Character Development:
The Rock: The mystery surrounding the Rock’s origins and the challenges of extracting the main body could create interesting plotlines.
Dubainium: The limited supply of this valuable material is a potential source of conflict, whether it’s corporate greed, international tensions, or technological limitations.
K.E.M.T.A.S: This advanced material offers vast possibilities for exploration and character development. Consider how it will change space travel, warfare, or even everyday life.
Areas for Further Exploration:
Societal Impact: How has the world changed since the impact? What are the political, economic, and social ramifications?
Character Motivations: How do individuals and groups react to these new discoveries? Are there power struggles, ethical dilemmas, or personal journeys to be explored?
Technological Implications: What are the potential applications of Dubainium and K.E.M.T.A.S beyond space travel and suits? How will they impact other industries or fields?
Overall, this is a solid foundation for a sci-fi novel. The potential for exciting storylines and character arcs is evident.
Would you like to explore any of these areas further? Or perhaps you have a specific question about the background or character development?
I have a sort of synopsis created, and the beginning of a major character.
Great! I’m ready to dive into your synopsis and character. Feel free to share them whenever you’re ready.
I can help with:
Analyzing your character’s motivations and goals
Evaluating the plot’s coherence and potential
Brainstorming ideas for character development and plot twists
Providing feedback on pacing and tone
Let’s get started!
Synopsis first. Then character. Please hold your comments until after I’ve pasted the second block of text.
Understood. Please send the synopsis, and I’ll wait for the character before providing feedback.
- Introduction/Preface
- The vastness of space
- Emphasis on time and distance
- The Wreck
- Alien spacecraft adrift in interstellar space
- Adrift and broken for millennia
- Constructed of a material with amazing properties.
- Enters our solar system
- Impacts a small moonlet orbiting Saturn
- The impact deflects The Wreck
- The Wreck comes to rest on the Earth’s moon
- 65 million years ago
- A chunk of the moonlet is sent into the inner system
- It is the meteor that killed the dinosaurs
- Lead-in to the destruction of Dubai and the Persian Gulf
- Historical overview of the “Second Push to Space”.
- The first “Push to Space” was the Cold War which led to Neil Armstrong’s “First Step”.
- The second “Push to space” was sparked by Elon Musk and SpaceX
- The third “Push to space” was born in the aftermath of the destruction of Dubai
- The destruction of Dubai and the Person Gulf
- A meteor from outside the solar system impacts Dubai
- Referred to as “The Rock” it does not disintegrate on impact
- Composed of unknown and theoretically impossible minerals
- Both Lunar and Martian “bridgeheads” lost due to interruptions in the supply chain due to “The Rock.
- 10-20 years to recover from the effects of the impact.
- Discoveries and insights learned and discovered by studies of “The Rock”
- K.E.M.T.S.
- (K) Kinetic
- (EM) Electromagnetic
- (T) Thermal
- (A) Aggregate
- (S) Shielding
- The Third push to space begins
- “Bridgeheads” established on the Moon and Mars
- The real story begins here.
- ?
Got it. Please send the character when you’re ready.
RIC MATHEWS_001
Ric had filled out the application when he was barely out of college. He really hadn’t thought he’d even be considered for the position, but when they called less than a week later to say he had the job, he was totally dumbfounded. As a newly minted systems engineer, he thought he’d have to wait years before he could get to space. But the Consortium seemed to think he had what they needed, so a couple of weeks later, after some of the most rigorous training he’d ever had, he found himself on a rocket making his first trip to the moon.
He was into his third 6 month rotation when he was assigned to an EVA expedition to investigate a possible cave opening that had been spotted from orbit. With more and more people coming to the moon The Consortium was looking for fast and easy ways to create shelter. It was one of his jobs to assess finds like this and evaluate the practicality of using lava tubes and any other natural lunar feature that might allow human survival in an environment that is the antithesis of life. serve the purpose of protecting that fragile bag of skin that we call our bodies.
Unfortunately, (or maybe not) they found it to be little more than an overhang once they arrived at the crater. And a thin one at that. It was while they were surveying the terrain that the discovery was made. One of the geologists’ attention was drawn to something strange about the rim of another crater in the distance. That something was a straight line. In the jumbled and blasted surface of the moon, the LAST thing you expect to see is a straight line. And this straight line was several hundred feet long.
At first, it was impossible to understand what could create such a thing in such a place. Closer examination showed that the “straight” line was the peak of something MUCH larger and not a natural feature. In In fact, that peak was 100% artificial and NOT created by man. Later investigation showed that it was indeed some kind of spacecraft. But investigating The Wreck was only possible on the moon.
Shortly after the news broke, the Consortium announced that they would create a site they would name Selene City. The plan was to use a small impact crater to build a multi-level base that could accommodate thousands of people. It would take years to construct, but was necessary if humanity wanted to study the Wreck.
It is well documented that this single discovery created more chaos and controversy than any other discovery in human history. To this day there are those who will deny the existence of extraterrestrial life, let alone intelligent life. That one single discovery overturned nearly every major religion on the planet. Those who accepted the discovery that we are not alone became obsessed with learning everything possible from the Wreck.
Naturally, Ric wanted in on that and promptly signed an open-ended contract. That was years ago and now he was the director of mechanical operations with a staff of nearly 200 people. He only answered to the current City director, and the Consortium Council back on Earth.
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(main character) had filled out the application when he was barely out of college. He really hadn’t thought he’d even be considered for the position, but when they called less than a week later to say he had the job, he was totally dumbfounded. As a newly minted systems engineer, he thought he’d have to wait years before he could get to space. But the Consortium seemed to think he had what they needed, so a couple of weeks later, after some of the most rigorous training he’d ever had, he found himself on a rocket making his first trip to the moon.
He was into his third 6 month rotation when he was assigned to an EVA expedition to investigate a possible cave opening that had been spotted from orbit. With more and more people coming to the moon The Consortium was looking for fast and easy ways to create shelter. It was one of his jobs to assess finds like this and evaluate the practicality of using lava tubes and any other natural lunar feature that might allow human survival in an environment that is the antithesis of life. serve the purpose of protecting that fragile bag of skin that we call our bodies.
Unfortunately, (or maybe not) they found it to be little more than an overhang once they arrived at the crater. And a thin one at that. It was while they were surveying the terrain that the discovery was made. One of the geologists’ attention was drawn to something strange about the rim of another crater in the distance. That something was a straight line. In the jumbled and blasted surface of the moon, the LAST thing you expect to see is a straight line. And this straight line was several hundred feet long.
At first, it was impossible to understand what could create such a thing in such a place. Closer examination showed that the “straight” line was the peak of something MUCH larger and not a natural feature. In In fact, that peak was 100% artificial and NOT created by man. Later investigation showed that it was indeed some kind of spacecraft. But investigating The Wreck was only possible on the moon.
Shortly after the news broke, the Consortium announced that they would create a site they would name Selene City. The plan was to use a small impact crater to build a multi-level base that could accommodate thousands of people. It would take years to construct, but was necessary if humanity wanted to study the Wreck.
It is well documented that this single discovery created more chaos and controversy than any other discovery in human history. To this day there are those who will deny the existence of extraterrestrial life, let alone intelligent life. That one single discovery overturned nearly every major religion on the planet. Those who accepted the discovery that we are not alone became obsessed with learning everything possible from the Wreck.
Naturally, Ric wanted in on that and promptly signed an open-ended contract. That was years ago and now he was the director of mechanical operations with a staff of nearly 200 people. He only answered to the current City director, and the Consortium Council back on Earth.
Let’s Dive Deeper into This Story
This is a fantastic start to a science fiction tale! The discovery of an alien spacecraft on the moon is a classic trope with endless possibilities.
Here are some potential directions your story could take:
Potential Plot Developments:
The Wreck’s Secrets: What is the purpose of the spacecraft? What technology does it contain? Is there any sign of the alien creators?
Character Development: How has the discovery and subsequent life on the moon changed Ric? What are his motivations? What challenges does he face as a leader?
Conflict and Tension: Introduce a rival faction or a personal conflict within the Selene City community. Perhaps there’s a disagreement about how to approach the Wreck, or a dangerous mission that puts the crew at risk.
Ethical Dilemmas: Explore the ethical implications of studying an alien civilization. Should they attempt to communicate? What if the technology is dangerous?
Questions to Consider:
What is the overall tone of the story you want to create? Is it a thrilling adventure, a thought-provoking exploration of humanity, or a mix of both?
How will you balance the technical aspects of space exploration with the human drama?
What role will the Earth play in the story? Will there be significant interactions with Earth-based governments or corporations?
Would you like to brainstorm some specific plot points or character arcs?
I’m eager to help you develop this story further!
My original working title for this tale is/was Infrastructure. I want to try tell the tale from the point of view of the people “behind the scenes”. Ric is a systems engineer. The other characters will be technicians in various fields.
A Focus on the Infrastructure: A Solid Choice
Focusing on the “behind the scenes” perspective is an excellent choice!
It offers a unique opportunity to delve into the challenges and triumphs of those who make space exploration possible.
Here are some potential avenues to explore:
Technical Challenges: Given Ric’s role as a systems engineer, you could delve into the complexities of maintaining and upgrading systems in a lunar environment. What are the specific problems they face? How do they innovate to overcome them?
Character Dynamics: Explore the relationships between different technical roles. How do they collaborate, compete, or clash? What are their personal motivations for being on the moon?
Daily Life: Show the mundane aspects of lunar life. What does it mean to cook, sleep, and exercise in low gravity? How do they cope with isolation and the psychological challenges of long-term space missions?
Would you like to brainstorm some potential plotlines or character arcs for your supporting technicians?
For example, we could develop a character who specializes in lunar vehicle maintenance, facing the challenge of repairing equipment in a harsh environment. Or perhaps a geologist who becomes obsessed with understanding the moon’s geological history.
Enough brainstorming for today. Much to reflect on here. My thanks.
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It’s great to see you’re excited about the story. Take your time to develop these ideas. I’m here whenever you’re ready to dive back in.
Would you like to explore some potential character names or backstories before we wrap up?
Not today, thank you. I’m done for now.
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Feel free to reach out whenever you’re ready to continue brainstorming or start writing. I’m here to help in any way I can.
Good luck with your writing!